Novel Structure Consulting & Critique

Getting your novel’s structure in order is crucial. Sometimes you need another pair of eyes.

Hi, I’m your extra pair of eyes.

I wrote a book called THE MONSTER NOVEL STRUCTURE WORKBOOK, and it comes with awesome downloads including a Monster Worksheet to help you work out your structure. To celebrate the book’s release I’m giving away Monster Worksheet Critiques, a $75 value, FOR FREE to the first 25 people who purchase the book before November 1, 2018 and apply.

When you’ve read the book, fill out a Worksheet for your manuscript. It can be at any stage of development, from ideas to drafting to revisions. Write a synopsis, up to 2 pages, to provide some more information about your story. (You may include things in one that should be in the other, leave something out, provide context, etc.) I’ll compare your Worksheet and Synopsis, but this critique is of the Worksheet only, not the Synopsis. Upload the Worksheet, Synopsis, and Proof of Purchase (PDF, screenshot, etc.) to this Google Form.

Purchase The Book Now Apply for Consult

$75 Value

Free to first 25 applicants
who purchase before Nov 1, 2018


How To

  • Purchase THE MONSTER NOVEL STRUCTURE WORKBOOK between September 15, 2018 and October 31, 2018.
  • Save a PDF or Screenshot your Proof of Purchase.
  • Get your downloads. The ebook includes a link to make this easy.
  • Read the book.
  • Fill out a Monster Worksheet (PDF or DOCX).
  • Write a Synopsis (guidelines here!), up to two pages.
  • Fill out the Google Form, uploading your Worksheet, Synopsis, and Proof of Purchase.
  • Allow a week for critiques to be returned.


  • To this Google Form.
  • A completed Monster Worksheet (PDF or DOCX).
  • A synopsis, up to 2 pages.
  • Proof of purchase, dated before November 1.


  • A one-page evaluation of the Worksheet.
  • Allow a week for critiques to be returned.


I understand that you may want to get your Worksheet critiqued in time for NaNoWriMo. If this is the case, you want to submit your materials as soon as possible, both so I can turn it around and so you can make any necessary changes. Allow a week for critiques to be returned. The last date to submit for a result before November is Friday October 19. Purchases after October 19 are still qualified to receive a critique, but won’t be eligible to have results back before November 1.

  • September 15 – The Workbook goes on sale!
  • September 15-October 31 – Purchase the ebook or downloads at any time during this window to claim the free critique.
  • October 19 – Last day to submit if you want your critique back before November 1.
  • October 31 – Last day to purchase and qualify for the free critique.
  • November 1 – NaNoWriMo starts!
  • December 31 – Last day to claim your critique.

Ready to get your consult?